RE: Re: [HM:255599] Oasis!

On 8 January 2013 18:22, Dipa Rani G. <diparanig@gmail.com> wrote:

Hello Guys,

This is my first post in this group, hope you like my short poetry in poetry language is it called Brevity Writing (the use of brief expressions), would like to know your opinion. 

Oasis!

I traveled by rough weather,

Through harsh winds, on unstable sands,

Chased by mirages, under the proud sun,

In course of discovering

the kindness of desert, an Oasis.

Thanks and take care.

Dipa Rani 

http://blogbydipa.blogspot.com 

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ALWAYS KEEP SMILING

ALWAYS KEEP_MAILING

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M.YUSUF
COONOOR
THE NILGIRIS

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I really enjoy your poem mostly your pizx

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